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[teanB]

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so im doing art gcse, and ive decided to try out a bit of photography, and i took this picture, and to be honest i think its real good for me. but what do you think?

 

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Well, the photo is pretty drab due to the weather. Post processing could liven it up a bit. If you were to be able to go back out there, I would walk about 50 feet to your left and shoot the other side of the vending truck, which would also point you right down the sidewalk. Much more interesting view, in my opinion. That carnival ride in the distance would make some good photography opportunities.

 

[SrBiscuit]

underexposed.
subject is hard to make out due to underexposure and distance.
treeline creates a nice leading line that takes you right to the fun looking thing in the center (carousel?), but i would def remove the pole that interupts the flow.