Take the canoli, Leave the gun

[liltimmy1313]

Since I am still a TPF N00B, I have been having trouble with inserting images, lemme know if it worked or not...

I Did everything myself, and with the except of minor textures, adding in the smoke (superstock.com, I don't smoke, let alone in the living room), and the selective color I did NOT edit it. Meaning, the lighting was for real. It wasn't really a studio setup either. I used a small flashlight propped up against the desk next to the couch. I sat on the couch, put the self-timer on, and hoped for the best. I used my tripod too

1/16 f/5.6 50mm, The Flashlight was a 9 bulb LED pocket flashlight.

 

[Peter_pan91]

The image is great, get rid of the texture though, it dosn't had to the image, maybe try with some grain but the stripes are just annoying..

Peter

 

[Dagwood56]

The image is great, get rid of the texture though, it dosn't had to the image, maybe try with some grain but the stripes are just annoying..

Peter

I agree.

 

[c.cloudwalker]

Before I read the text under the photo, I thought you had a weird way of holding the cigarette. Doesn't look very natural.

Then I read... ok, you're not a smoker.

I agree that the lines are annoying.

 

[liltimmy1313]

Ha, yeah not gunna lie bout smokin' haha

Yeah, the texture is my least favorite part of the whole thing, I should probably get rid of it.

 

[bigtwinky]

Drop the texture and the coloured eyes. I'm personally not a big fan of selective colouring unless it truly adds to the image.

The rest of the image is nice!

 

[liltimmy1313]

Thanks for the feedback