testing lighting on myself ~~

[Kofman13]

 

[kundalini]

The bottom 1/4 to 1/3 of the frame is superfluous. The amount of negative space you have on the left would be better served on the right. You need some separation from the background. Otherwise, nice shot.

 

[Kofman13]

i wanted to be stepping out of the darkness. background separation would have defeated my idea... but yea ur right about the empty space

 

[kundalini]

i wanted to be stepping out of the darkness. background separation would have defeated my idea... but yea ur right about the empty space

I disagree. You only need a hint of separation sometimes. As is, there is not enough information for the viewer to be able to decipher your intent. IMO

 

[Kofman13]

ur right

 

[kundalini]

As Chiller would say.... your camera, your vision. The rest is only my opinion.