I've followed your previous threads and it looks like alot of the same problems.
blown highlights. Just look at the one picture of the living room and couches, the back door light is over powering the entire room.
you are mixing outside light with inside lights (like the small dining table pic).
maybe change your perspective - such as taking the picture with the window light behind you (living room - move the couches around for the photo).
maybe as a test try taking the pictures at night and use flash, then you'll learn to better balance the lighting and compare to some existing daylight shots.
but I think they are getting better.
my .02 cents worth from a newbie.