First, what's that on the right side of the photo?
The composition as potential I think! Did you used a tripod?
If not try to use one and decrease the exposure and increase the aperture. That was you'll have more "haulage"(?) in the water.
(I don't know if haulage is the right translation.. What I wanna say is that the water will look more like velvet..?) Sorry =X
That is a photo of the Croton Dam. Is that from this past spring or earlier?
Keep taking photographs of things you like........... but take them from different positions for different composition..
The water affect is fine, and I think that this is what you are going for.. But, to me, the photo doesn't really have a point of interest, nor is there really a subject that jumps out...
It seems a bit soft overall to me.........