The traveler hey, I appreciate your comment. This photograph is a portrait I made for my family and I and wanted to share it with you to get some reviews and C&c if needed. Knowing my grandfather I know that's the last thing he cares about. Your comment did make me think about the headline again which I have now changed.
Thank you.
*Added a second version.
**Edit: I was about to change it after commenting and can't seem to find the option anymore. Anyone knows howto do it or the option isn't available anymore?
I prefer the first version. For me, the portrait was all about the eyes and I felt you'd already nailed it with the first version. My father had Alzheimer's and when I saw your portrait, it felt immediately familiar. It was the eyes and what you can see in them: the growing emptiness, a deep sadness, exhaustion. In the second version, something is missing. They're clouded over too much, like he's blind. But Alzheimer's isn't blindness.
I'm sorry about your grandfather.