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tsabary

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A portrait of my grandpa.

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Wonderful photo. I like the hat, the wrinkles, and the beard...it all comes together very nicely.
 
Thank you very much everyone.
 
The picture is fine but did he or his guardian agree to you taking and posting this - using him as an exemplar?
I am very sensitive to this issue because I have a very close relative with a neurodegenerative disease.
She goes in and out of lucidity and in a few months she won't be able to make an informed consent about being photographed and the pictures used on the web.
 
The traveler hey, I appreciate your comment. This photograph is a portrait I made for my family and I and wanted to share it with you to get some reviews and C&c if needed. Knowing my grandfather I know that's the last thing he cares about. Your comment did make me think about the headline again which I have now changed.
Thank you.

*Added a second version.

**Edit: I was about to change it after commenting and can't seem to find the option anymore. Anyone knows howto do it or the option isn't available anymore?
 
Great pic, man.

stirred some emotion in me.
 
The traveler hey, I appreciate your comment. This photograph is a portrait I made for my family and I and wanted to share it with you to get some reviews and C&c if needed. Knowing my grandfather I know that's the last thing he cares about. Your comment did make me think about the headline again which I have now changed.
Thank you.

*Added a second version.

**Edit: I was about to change it after commenting and can't seem to find the option anymore. Anyone knows howto do it or the option isn't available anymore?

I prefer the first version. For me, the portrait was all about the eyes and I felt you'd already nailed it with the first version. My father had Alzheimer's and when I saw your portrait, it felt immediately familiar. It was the eyes and what you can see in them: the growing emptiness, a deep sadness, exhaustion. In the second version, something is missing. They're clouded over too much, like he's blind. But Alzheimer's isn't blindness.

I'm sorry about your grandfather.
 
prefer version 1 as well. good job. sorry it comes at such a price.
 
The traveler hey, I appreciate your comment. This photograph is a portrait I made for my family and I and wanted to share it with you to get some reviews and C&c if needed. Knowing my grandfather I know that's the last thing he cares about. Your comment did make me think about the headline again which I have now changed.
Thank you.

*Added a second version.

**Edit: I was about to change it after commenting and can't seem to find the option anymore. Anyone knows howto do it or the option isn't available anymore?

I prefer the first version. For me, the portrait was all about the eyes and I felt you'd already nailed it with the first version. My father had Alzheimer's and when I saw your portrait, it felt immediately familiar. It was the eyes and what you can see in them: the growing emptiness, a deep sadness, exhaustion. In the second version, something is missing. They're clouded over too much, like he's blind. But Alzheimer's isn't blindness.

I'm sorry about your grandfather.

Thank you for the C&C I appriciate it, and yes I can see what you are saying about the eyes and how they might reflect something that is not necciserely part of what I wanted to deliver.
Thank you again, and I am very sorry for your father aswell.

prefer version 1 as well. good job. sorry it comes at such a price.

Thank you very much.
 
The second one does it for me. The darkness kind of makes the details more vibrant. If that makes any sense at all!

Sorry to hear about the Alzheimer, my great grandmother had it. I wish i knew what i know now about photography. I would've done the same thing. Great picture, plucking at those heart strings some here.
 
Beautiful portrait.
 

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