The Smokers (Looking for C&C)

[TheKartus]

My first post on here, been reading for a little but just signed up . Just starting out, looking for some C&C on a few photos from one of my early tries. Thanks.

 

[snapla]

as a series, it looks kinda boring to me as all the shots look the same with the smoker face tilted up. i would like #1 best. #3 looks distracting to me. imho

 

[thebeatles]

Hide the bong.

 

[2003protege]

Too much motion blur, on top of what others have said.:meh:

 

[jimmyhickey]

The third one is compositionally pretty interesting, but all of them are a bit dark imo