This was stolen from me.

[RanD]

C&C welcome.


Carlo by RanD Whitfield, on Flickr

 

[Patrice]

Are you saying the photo was stolen, or the couch, or the board or..... The thread title and thread are ambiguous.

Are you asking for c&c on the photo itself?

Exposure seem ok. He's got a cell tower attached to his arm! A bit of a snap shot don't you think? A bit of cropping to make the flying kid more the focus of the image might be in order.

Keep trying.

 

[RanD]

It was already cropped once, because I shot with an 8mm fisheye, but here I get it another shot with the crop and I called Hoover and told them to cut down that cell phone tower, so it is gone now also. Any way I can make it feel like less of a snap shot? Or why you felt it was a snap shot?



Carlo 2 by RanD Whitfield, on Flickr

 

[SCraig]

It was already cropped once, because I shot with an 8mm fisheye, but here I get it another shot with the crop and I called Hoover and told them to cut down that cell phone tower, so it is gone now also. Any way I can make it feel like less of a snap shot? Or why you felt it was a snap shot?

The EXIF data says it was a 50mm lens and that sure doesn't look a shot from any fisheye lens I've ever seen.

It's cropped too much now. He's cramped up in the frame. Leave some space in front of him but get rid of most of it behind him.

 

[proberok]

That's no fish eye.

 

[table1349]

http://www.thephotoforum.com/forum/...ims-guide-getting-comments-your-pictures.html

 

[480sparky41 40]

50mm. On a 16"x20" view camera.

 

[RanD]

Carlo OG by RanD Whitfield, on Flickr

Look like a fisheye now?

Coming with a new crop I guess.

 

[RanD]

For the crop would it be bad too cut off part of the chair or is that just a bad thing to do?

 

[fenderjaguar]

Looks like a 50mm to me.

 

[bhop]

No, doesn't look like a fisheye, but personally, I like the full frame (last photo). I feel like the surrounding environment puts the viewer in the scene. Plus you can see the little ramp that he's ollieing off of, which is kinda cool too.

 

[480sparky41 40]

.........Look like a fisheye now?.........

Uh, not really.

 

[Josh66]

Look like a fisheye now?

If it was a fisheye, why does the exif say 50mm? Did you manually change the exif? (Not sure why you would do that though...)

 

[fenderjaguar]

I also think you shouldn't crop it.

 

[Jeff92]

What is odd that another picture in his stream looks like a fisheye but the exif reads 50mm as well...

Edit: Maybe fisheye as in fisheye filter