Thoughts on my new watermark.

[Jaemie]

First reaction? "very girlie". Second reaction? "Jessica LK"??? What?

Jessica Lynn is a very nice name...I love the name! But Jessica "LK"....how do I "say that", mentally???

That's just not a good business name or DBA name...it's got a gutteral sound, as well as some somewhat negative connotations...

The scorllwork on the watermark is awfully "busy", and as I said, "girlie"...

I agree with Darrell. "Jessica LK" just doesn't sound good. And the scroll is too frilly, at least for my taste. And what does "A PICTURE PAINTED BY THE SUN" mean? It sounds like someone trying hard to be cute.

Assuming you haven't some hideous last name, like Slutskaya or Toadgullet, I'd go with Jessica [last name] Photography and keep the graphics clean and simple.

 

[rokvi]

Toadgullet,

 

[12sndsgood]

The design of it looks similar to the way a ton of watermarks are these days. So maybe rethink that a little bit. Try to make it more personal or more distinct to you. Also location is bad for me. Try to keep it down low in this style picture, right now its competing with your son for attention and personally thats the last thing i'd want.