Three shots of a sailing boat

vesko

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The colours where not great, so I desided to go b&w with a bit of tint:

1. Binda is comming home.

BindaisCommingHome.jpg


2. Boat and the city

Boat-and-the-City.jpg


3. Home at last

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What do you think and how can I fix the sky?

Thank you!
 

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i like these alot. and i like the framing in #1, but i would have used less branches, they are sort of distracting

The braches are great! I really like how the one reaches right into the middle of the frame. The horizon was the distracting part for me - it slopes down to the left a little. Straighten that .... the tone of the branches rocks. Really sets off the white and grey of the rest of the shot.

2nd picture is nice. the boat and the buildings are on point.

pun intended?
 
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I followed the advice of PNA, also decided to go back to colour on the first one. Gone too far with the tint, I think.
Thanks again!

1. Binda is comming home.





Sydney-Boat3.jpg


2. Boat and the city.

Sydney-Boat.jpg


3. Home at last!

Sydney-Boat2.jpg
 

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I like #1 as originally posted better. The tinting works totether with the brackes and the blown out clouds.
 

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