Strobist - A lighting Collaboration with William Chik
AB1600 + 47 Octo Boomed Top right Camera
AB400 Model lower left for rim
AB400 + Silver Umbrella Camera left for fill
Thunder Gray Seamless BG
You've done well on the top 2/3's of the shot with lighting but as a viewer I am left dangling with the trousers. They are a blob. No definition. Cutting off at the knees is not a good idea.
Colors between the background an the wardrobe are good.