Tiny pump

[Christie Photo]

I shot this today for use in a company brochure. The hand was used for scale.

I left plenty of room, as I'm sure it will be cropped much tighter.

Pete

 

[The_Traveler]

critique removed by poster.

**image removed**

Please do not post edits of other member's photos without their permission. (edited by Chase)

 

[Christie Photo]

Traveler... delete MY image from your post.

 

[The_Traveler]

Perhaps you might turn on the option in your profile that says 'my pictures are not OK to edit.'

 

[nabero]

I like how this is set up The product itself is obviously the focus, but I think a bit of illumination on the bullet points would work too...as they are they're a bit hard to read (but then again...my eyes are getting old )

Cheers!

 

[Olympus8MP]

Maybe a little more DOF would make the bullet points easier to read? I like the composition, though.

 

[Christie Photo]

Thanks! I'm told that I may not have been shallow enough for thier tastes. They may blur it a bit.

 

[Christie Photo]

This is how the project ended... FINALLY!

 

[mysteryscribe]

Looks good to me... One of the things I was surprised by was on another forum I suggested someone add something like a dollar bill to show scale and they were shocked. The idea that an illustrative image needed a scale was a brand new concept to some of them.

the pencil worked as well as the hand.

 

[Jeff Canes]

nice job