To scared to go to critique gallery.

Artemis · May 17, 2004

Pic of my dog, this one is really rubbish but only one i have small enough to display, im having trouble making my images small...

Oki this one was alot nicer cause it had all the image but i messed with it to make it smaller

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And last but not least

christopher · May 17, 2004

first one is ok, the cropping could be worked on more
the second one is out of focus and is FULL of hot spots, trash it.

keeeep posting!

Artemis · May 17, 2004

The second one was my fav, maybe when u see it with all the other stuff...
Full of hot spots? isnt that good?

terri · May 17, 2004

These both look slightly overexposed on my monitor. And my crappy work monitor usually darkens things badly. The first one is not as bad as the second one, though; it has major hot spots in several areas.

Great shot of the dog, though.....I love it when they naturally "strike a pose" like that!

Artemis · May 17, 2004

My dog has a nack of that, dunno how she just loves the camera, and will wait ages for her photo to be taken

Artemis · May 17, 2004

What yah think of the cloud image?

christopher · May 17, 2004

I don't like the cloud image, it's way too photoshopped and doesn't do a thing for me, it looks like one of those prayer cards. sorry. Maybe darken it and add a touch more contrast.
but hot spots are over-exposed areas that are a lot brighter than other portions of the picture.

Artemis · May 17, 2004

ahh, refresh and go to the top, i edited my top pic.
Heres another pic, i just found this lille piece of gold, hope you like.

christopher · May 17, 2004

it's an ok image, the composition is dull but I like the fingers of light. the colours are muddy, but it might be my screen. that one tree that pokes up straight in the middle is really distracting.

Artemis · May 17, 2004

Hehe you have a very good point, thats like the best im doing at the mo, im hopping to get alot better

christopher · May 17, 2004

perfect! take more pictures! tape the camera to your wrist if you have to!
when I'm not at work I have my camera. heh

Artemis · May 17, 2004

Thats what i hope to do hehe.
I got my exams, then i go on holiday and ill have my SLR cause its my b-day soon.
Im gonna get work experience later taking photos.
Then im gonna do photography at College

mrsid99 · May 17, 2004

Artemis said:
ahh, refresh and go to the top, i edited my top pic.
Heres another pic, i just found this lille piece of gold, hope you like.

Now that one is neat!
The colors and composition really appeal to me.

canonrebel · May 17, 2004

I like the one of the dog, it has possibilities if cropped. But for now, the dog is walking out of the picture a/c the crop. Shave off the right margin and the lower margin in such a way that would place the dog in the lower-right intersection of "thirds" and it'll be a much nicer photo.