Today's shoot.

ghache · Oct 9, 2011

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shootermcgavin · Oct 9, 2011

not sure why there are 2 threads, I like the third more but she's missing a breast so lighting issues again

ghache · Oct 9, 2011

shootermcgavin said:
not sure why there are 2 threads, I like the third more but she's missing a breast so lighting issues again

Lightning issue? this is exactly what i wanted to do, harsh lightning.

shootermcgavin · Oct 9, 2011

yeah if you took her cleavage in 1 with her face in 3 I'd like the shot, but I don't find girls with one breast attractive and her chin looks weak in the first one so that doesn't do it for me either. I don't really get the point of 2, plus the pose doesn't do it for me it took me a little to realize she was holding her hair not sure why.

ghache · Oct 9, 2011

shootermcgavin said:
yeah if you took her cleavage in 1 with her face in 3 I'd like the shot, but I don't find girls with one breast attractive and her chin looks weak in the first one so that doesn't do it for me either. I don't really get the point of 2, plus the pose doesn't do it for me it took me a little to realize she was holding her hair not sure why.

tirediron · Oct 10, 2011

There's a very fine line between artistically harsh lighting and bad lighting. IMO, you've strayed over that line with this work. #1 isn't bad, but #s 2 & 3 are in desparate need of the key light being dropped down at least a stop. Also, the shadow in #2 makes it look like she's pouring something out of a bottle on to her head.

Derrel · Oct 10, 2011

#1 looks good....wish there were more light on the camera-right boob, but minor quibble...

#2 looks artistic...like the shadow, like the pose...but wish she were a bit more to the left, or that you would clone in a bigger canvas on the right-hand side for a slightly better visual balance...the shadow carries a lot of weight in that shot.

#3 looks very hard-lighted, but still interesting to look at. I personally think the extreme light and dark interplay is absolutely fascinating to look at...the more you look at it the better it seems.

The model's very good-looking,which is always a plus. I think these are some of your best work yet, with the most daring lighting I've seen you using.

ghache · Oct 12, 2011

here a couple more.

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shootermcgavin · Oct 12, 2011

I like those a lot more, the lighting on the face of 4 seems odd. It goes from light to dark to light again, I still like it though it just takes away from the 3dness.

bennielou · Oct 25, 2011

good lordie! LOL.
Wow.
Um.
Wow.
Ok, I just don't get these. They look like a teenager in a windstorm, in a hooker outfit, trying to look hot for an old dude that promised her to make her a model. (Not saying you did, it just looks like that to me).. I'm just being honest. I don't like these at all.

ghache · Oct 25, 2011

bennielou said:
good lordie! LOL.
Wow.
Um.
Wow.
Ok, I just don't get these. They look like a teenager in a windstorm, in a hooker outfit, trying to look hot for an old dude that promised her to make her a model. (Not saying you did, it just looks like that to me).. I'm just being honest. I don't like these at all.

hahahahah, you don't get anything these day i see. perhaps you should pay someone to help you out hhahaahahah

How can it look like i promised her to make her a model? she is a model! probably more than you are a professional wedding photographer!

And don't try to get these cheap shot bull**** at me because you will find me really ****in annoying. you call schwetty a stalker? you dig my old thread and bring them back! ahahahahah

Are you mad because i told you all the shots you posted in the other thread were out of focus? poor you! Seems like you cant handle the truth.

I am 26 btw! you are the old lady here.