Toddler Sisters

[DanaDawn]

I could use some CC on this image please. Underexposed/Overexposed/ skin tones? What could I do to make it better? I'm portfolio building, does this look professional? Thank you in advance!


DSC_0140 by danamenendez, on Flickr

 

[frommrstomommy]

So sweet!

 

[Designer]

Pretty good, except for the setting. I don't mind the grass, but the blanket is distracting, mostly because it seems out of place, and it's a big white thing.

If you're planning a re-shoot, just reach over and pull down the pink top.

 

[The_Traveler]

seems a bit light, undersaturated and blue especially against that dark background.

 

[DanaDawn]

Pretty good, except for the setting. I don't mind the grass, but the blanket is distracting, mostly because it seems out of place, and it's a big white thing.

If you're planning a re-shoot, just reach over and pull down the pink top.

Thanks! I didn't think the blanket was that distracting. I really need to pay more attention to wardrobe malfunctions, but these little ones would not stay still!

seems a bit light, undersaturated and blue especially against that dark background.

Thanks Lew! I normally edit my images a bit dark, so I tried to lighten this one up and now I see how ghostly the big sisters face turned out. Your edit brings out her features better.