Travel

[crevest]

A group of men travel on top of a truck. I like this photo because we do not know where they are going and we can only guess fast movement from the tshirt of the younger one.



Cedric

 

[gsgary]

Only problem is i can't tell they are on a truck, i would have included the truck

 

[Light Guru]

Only problem is i can't tell they are on a truck, i would have included the truck

^^^ THAT

 

[Designer]

I know you like your watermark, and no doubt spent considerable time developing it, but in this shot it just doesn't quite balance the remainder of the composition.

 

[timor]

Yes, some piece of truck would be welcome here. In this situation your logo becomes to distractive.
Another thing is your background. What are the dark shadowy lines, 3 horizontal and 2 vertical ?

 

[charlie76]

Cool shot...but using logos as a part if an image is a no-go bro

 

[manaheim]

There's no sense of where they are, and what they are doing. The man my eyes are drawn to his has hand nearly up his nose, which is weird.

Also too much dead space in the image that contributes nothing to the shot- most notably the top of the frame.

It might have been an interesting moment, but you didn't capture it successfully.

 

[crevest]

Yes, some piece of truck would be welcome here. In this situation your logo becomes to distractive.
Another thing is your background. What are the dark shadowy lines, 3 horizontal and 2 vertical ?

I noticed those marks. No idea where they come from. I don't know whether it is from the camera itself (can't see them on other shots)...

Cedric

 

[crevest]

Trying to embed without the logo

And thanking you for the helpful comments.

Cedric

 

[manaheim]

Still doesn't work as a picture. Learn a critical lesson... When to abandon something, learn from the experience and move on.

 

[Rick58]

Here I thought the kid was pedaling a bike, and the other three were sitting on his handlebars.

 

[manaheim]

I can totally see that.

 

[timor]

Here I thought the kid was pedaling a bike, and the other three were sitting on his handlebars.

One strong kid !

 

[crevest]

Here I thought the kid was pedaling a bike, and the other three were sitting on his handlebars.

Now that you mention it ! Armstrong with even more steroids ! And in Morocco it could be