Two for C&C please...

[bevoholic]

Took these tonight in downtown Austin. These are my first night shots. Let me know what I need to do to improve. Thanks!

1.
ISO 200
2.0 sec @ f/7.1

2.
ISO 200
3.0 sec @ f/7.1

 

[AprilEye]

Um... nothing?? They look great.

 

[Trever1t]

:thumbup:

 

[bevoholic]

Thanks guys. I think #2 is my favorite. I think #1 is showing too much of the green tree and it draws the focus away from the building.

 

[fokker]

I prefer #1 personally. Both good shots though.

 

[bevoholic]

Anyone else? I'd love some more comments.

 

[Samerr9]

Both r great photos..

but IMPO the sky is over edited.. like the lighter blue around the bldg does look real to me .. it looks like a triangle.. if u make it wider with softer fade i think it will look more realistic.. at the end it only a personal opinion..

 

[bevoholic]

Both r great photos..

but IMPO the sky is over edited.. like the lighter blue around the bldg does look real to me .. it looks like a triangle.. if u make it wider with softer fade i think it will look more realistic.. at the end it only a personal opinion..

I was thinking that I did a bit much on the sky, but I like the way it looks. Thanks for your comment.

 

[DennyCrane]

Both are good, but I prefer #2. In #1, there's something bothering me about the street through the trees at the bottom of the shot. Not sure what it is that bothers me, but the absence of it in #2 cleans the shot up tremendously.

 

[bevoholic]

Both are good, but I prefer #2. In #1, there's something bothering me about the street through the trees at the bottom of the shot. Not sure what it is that bothers me, but the absence of it in #2 cleans the shot up tremendously.

Thanks!