Two photos of Kirsten, C&C welcome.

[RMThompson]

 

[tirediron]

C&C per req:

To be honest, neither of these are really working for me. Her body position in #1 seems awkward and forced, and the blown highlights on the edge of left arm/face are rather distracting. In #2, the background is far too distracting, and use of an on-camera flash has made the lighting very 'bleah'. As well the cut of the bathing suit seems to give her an odd shape.

These are nice shots, but I don't think they're quite 'there' yet. You've got an attractive model, so get back out and practice some more!

Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

~John

 

[RMThompson]

Actually, neither of these are using an on camera flash, but thank you for your thoughts.

 

[tirediron]

Actually, neither of these are using an on camera flash, but thank you for your thoughts.

Okay, fair enough; adjust your light source such that you get the pin-point catchlights out of the centre of her eye (Which, 99.9 times out of a hundred is caused by an on-camera flash).

 

[DiskoJoe]

Hot chick. one is kinda okay but looks kinda goofy. A little too silly a pose for that type of outfit. Should have went for more of a serious look of mystery. Two just looks trashy. Mostly cause of the suit.

You have any other shots?

 

[Corvphotography]

i like goofy and i like trashy ha ha. i think the background in the first pic doesnt work well w what you were shooting IMO. I like the idea w the glitter and the little mask. RMThompson....i really like your Flickr photos.