updated portrait

marmots · Feb 25, 2012

what do you think of this?

edit:

here it is with less intense eyes

WesternGuy · Feb 25, 2012

First impressions - 1) - it seems a little dark - underexposed? 2) - the skin colour has a reddish tinge to it in places. 3) - the background is distracting, particularly that large rectangular, dark object growing out of his head and the rectangular bar coming out of the side of his head. You do have to watch your backgrounds in shots like this, other wise you will often end up with what I call "sprouts" - things that appear to grow from various parts of the body, particularly the head. My 0.02¢ FWIW.

Cheers,

WesternGuy

GeorgieGirl · Feb 25, 2012

Nice eyes.

fokker · Feb 25, 2012

Overdone eyes.

GeorgieGirl · Feb 25, 2012

I like the lips too.

marmots · Feb 25, 2012

the pointy of the processing on this pone was to look surreal

RebeccaAPhotography · Feb 25, 2012

well if your goal was to make is surreal than I think you achieved it. My first impression was def over done eyes.... Ditto to what western said about background

paigew · Feb 25, 2012

I like the pp. Looks like a teenage heart throb :lol:

. I think I would like it more without the hand in his face.

MacHoot · Feb 25, 2012

Kayser-Fleischer rings are a sign of Wilson's Disease, which involves abnormal copper handling by the liver resulting in copper accumulation in the body. Better get him checked.