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JustinFore

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Shot these yesterday, to be printed. (Valentine's Day theme) Variance in color grading is intentional. Any critique is very welcome!

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Get the URL of the image and put it between
and if the URL starts with "Https" delete the s.
 
I know, I took them down after I saw the NWS sticky right after posting. I'm reviewing that thread right now.

Okay, I put them back up...they seem to be appropriate.
 
#1 and #3.. nice! :)

# 2.. the pose just is off (she looks pissed or bored, not sexy!)... and the color is too cool compared to the others, intentional or not!
 
Culo springs to mind.
 
WB appears to be different in #2; overall the skin seems wayyyyyyyyyyyyyy too processed. There's absolutely no discernable texture at all.
 
WB appears to be different in #2; overall the skin seems wayyyyyyyyyyyyyy too processed. There's absolutely no discernable texture at all.

Welcome to fashion photography ;) These were all shot with the same WB...they are all color graded different for the sake of the editor.


Derrel, disturbing use of the word "spring" lol
 
tirediron said:
WB appears to be different in #2; overall the skin seems wayyyyyyyyyyyyyy too processed. There's absolutely no discernable texture at all.

I agree about the skin smoothing. Fashion photography should clear the skin without making it look plastic. I also don't know if it's just the size of the pictures but in #1 and 3 the eyes seem a bit soft to me.
 
These will probably look better B&W.
 
1 & 3 are the better of the 3 and all seem to need bit more work. never the less good job
 

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