Vilão - Photoshoot

[crphotolover]

Hi guys I'm new here, and this is my first post at the forum,

Can you give me your opinions about this set?

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Vilão by CR PhotoLover Page, no Flickr

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Vilão by CR PhotoLover Page, no Flickr

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Vilão by CR PhotoLover Page, no Flickr

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Vilão by CR PhotoLover Page, no Flickr

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Vilão by CR PhotoLover Page, no Flickr

 

[Derrel]

Well, shots 2 and 5 diminish his importance by making him small, and low, within the frame. #3 with that light source at the top edge of the frame is not a very successful composition. I like #4, with him reaching for his hat brim, but maybe lighten it up just a tiny bit. I'm not a fan of shots 1 and 3, with him low in the frame, centered, and with a LOT of side-space that is devoid of visual information. Frame #1 has him VERY low in the frame. Which makes him look insignificant.