Want C&C please!!

[Derrel]

I'm sorry but i think your application of the concept of intersubjectivity to photography is a huge stretch and wishful thinking. Comparing it to language doesn't work either. I think some people who have learned good digital photography and post processing skills go way overboard in trying to set themselves up as aesthetics authorities.

Empirical observation would indicate that multiple people in this very thread see the same problems with the photos that the OP asked for C&C on. Same photos, different people, same areas of concern. Ergo...there actually does exist a language of visual communication. Many of us are familiar with it. Sorry. But this is the same issue I've spoken about for years here. There actually does exist a language of visual communication, and many people who are new to photography want to "do photography", but they are unwilling to put the time in to study in order to learn the visual language.