With the leaves out of focus it wouldn't work - it would be a shot of a waterfall with all kinds of OOF stuff in the way. I'd crop the top and right to make it tighter on the leaves and waterfall.
I'm juggling here. I like the concept but here the leaves are the main focus, which is fine, but if you wanted the waterfall to be the focus, I'd show a little less leaves and more water. But just my opinion. Neat shot though
Same shot...with a colorful bird on those branches in the foreground would look ideal. hmmm...perhaps buy a fake bird, place it on one of the branches and re-shoot. lol...
Another possible composition: ...it might look interesting if you focused sharply on the leaves and everything else has a gradually fading dof.