what do u guys think of these?

[outlandishogle]

#1

#2

#3

i kno this one is blurry but i had to set up fast
#4

#5

 

[lostprophet]

1st shot is my fave

 

[Iron Flatline]

1st shot is my fave

Me too, I like it.

 

[Tolyk]

Yeah I like the first one as well

 

[outlandishogle]

thank you i think thats my favorite to. do u guys have any tips on how to make them better?

 

[GwagDesigns]

It looks like you might have been using a higher ISO in that first one as there seems to be some noticeable noise. Try lowering that down, and using a tripod if you didn't already

 

[Paul Ron]

#5 is great.

 

[am_photoer]

I like the 1st one, but you can see a strange noise especially in the sky.

and yeah, a tripod can both remove any camera shake and allow you to use a longer shutterspeed so you can then control the ISO (less noise) and aperture (more depth of field).

 

[Bonnie]

Hi, I'm new to the forum but I think you photos are great! #4 and #5 are my fave's
........Bonnie

 

[outlandishogle]

thanks guys. and thank you for all the tips

 

[LeeLeeMelis]

What are you trying to say with these? I like the first one with all of the different lines and the light coming hard from the right. The others I think what you are trying to portray in the shot is not visible.

 

[burtharrris]

#2, #3 are a little unremarkable, and #4 doesn't do anything for me, maybe because the lines converge to the center of the frame.

But I really like the colors and effects of #1 and #5. They are interesting

 

[dipukp]

I liked #5

 

[drflet]

I liked #5 too...you're doing a good job looking for leading lines for your image. The composition is solid.

 

[dakkon76]

Lots of cool tracks there. Would be nice to get the lights turned off and get some good moonlight on them instead! Nice pictures though. I liked 5 the best, but everything seems too centered... maybe if the camera were off to the left a bit and rather than looking straight down the center of the right track... just look straight down the left rail of that right track... Not that you'll be heading back there for that shot, but just a suggestion...