If you have read any of the threads of new people who enter the same way, you would know these things:
1) asking for a general review of a bunch of photos is absolutley totally useless
2) asking people who don't know you to go off site is a no-go. So pick one or two that you have some issues with and post them here.
But 3 - 5 pages is no big deal. Glad people send in stuff. We all learn for it.