Hey Jaime - I'm sure I'm gonna get a lot of heat for this (lol) but I do not shoot in raw. (EEK) ...I know I should be..but can't make the transfer..just seems like SO MUCH extra work. I guess the day will come when I mess up a shoot and from that day forward I'll swear I learned my lesson.
In regards to the eyes..I usually do some dodging to lighten the eyes up in Photoshop.
I'll vote for #4; normally I would say that it needed to be cropped more tightly to the subject, but in this case, you've got it framed so nicley it works perfectly.