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What I've been up to since I've been gone...maybe NSFW

AtuspidsGoddess

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...trying to improve...trying not to get too caught up in my day job...although I have to admit I have been pulling some serious round the clock hours...:(

Here's a little bit of what I've up to since...CC welcome...

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nice nice! i like them all, well exposed and good focus. i wished the first one had a bit more room above her head and below her legs though..
 
Nice images, but a few thoughts if you don't mind........

#1 - As shot, the chair on the left edge of the frame is superfluous, adds nothing to the image. On the other hand, since she is gazing in that direction, the addition of a hand (male or female, I don't judge) holding a Monte Cristo and having a snifter of cognac on the side table would be an enhancement, IMO. Think about context and telling a story.

#2 - Although the candlestick is phallic and lends itself to the overal sex appeal, it is also the dominant element in the image.

#3 - There are quite a few people that like the bright background look. I'm not amongst them.


Good results, and this is just my 2¢ worth. Thanks for sharing.
 

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