I like the set-up and really like the idea. The only things I would change are the cropping of the foot on the right, it would be nice to see it complete; and the middle kilt is lost in shadow. A fill-flash or refelctor would help bring out the detail. There is some washing-out of the white, but it can be tricky to get it to stay white while keeping some shadow detail. I would probably err on the side of keeping it white, myself, considering the compostition. Too much shadow and you would lose the effect.
Good idea, Shark. This is something that's begging to hang in a pub!