Nice composition and angle, and I agree there is something great you captured in her eyes. The lighting is beautiful. The rest of her face (however very slightly) feels a little strained. Its barely there but I noticed it, mostly in her lips.
Thank you both.I'm experimenting with lighting, to learn portrait. Flower Child: it could be, consider she has only eye make up, and here it is cold (thus dried lips, with some cocoa butter that reflects a little ). Although I smoothened skin, I did'nt do much.