Wish I didn't cut their feet off oy! C&C on this ~

[CorrieMichael]

So anything else I screwed up other than chopping their feet off!

 

[Shipman]

I really like it a lot, but the cropped feet really does ruin it for me. Otherwise a very nice picture in my opinion.

 

[Derrel]

The location is nice, their dresses are cute, the girls are cute, the lighting has a nice warm feel, the lens bokeh is interesting. But what bugs me are the way their feet have been cut off, but also the way one girl is looking at the camera, and the other is looking at another person off-camera. And the way they are so far to the right in the frame, with the older girl looking "out" of the short side of the frame. All in all, this shot has a number of significant issues. But..great light..great props...but bad framing, weird composition, and subjects with "divided loyalties" let's call it.

 

[CorrieMichael]

Thanks everyone!

 

[DiskoJoe]

So anything else I screwed up other than chopping their feet off!
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They need fill lighting.