wrapped... a bit

FITBMX · Oct 21, 2015

I like it, but I wish she "popped" in color/light from everything around her a little more.

tirediron · Oct 21, 2015

Agree with the schnozz! I'd also like to see her moved away from the centre just a bit. That said, it's a nice image, and I really like the concept.

The_Traveler · Oct 21, 2015

Not your best work. - and too small to really see any detail.
the colors are saturated and lush but, at least in this size, her hair is an ink blot.
Her pose seems awkward and forced andthe is no grace or delicacy in the way she is standing.
It's sort of a 'stand up against the wall and put your hands up'.
Every limb and her face is a different tone.

Sorry,

FITBMX · Oct 21, 2015

tirediron said:
Agree with the schnozz! I'd also like to see her moved away from the centre just a bit. That said, it's a nice image, and I really like the concept.

I noticed you didn't come up with that name until after I posted self-portraits! :biglaugh:

mmaria · Oct 26, 2015

FITBMX said:
I like it, but I wish she "popped" in color/light from everything around her a little more.

tirediron said:
Agree with the schnozz! I'd also like to see her moved away from the centre just a bit. That said, it's a nice image, and I really like the concept.

yeah I understand

Thank you

mmaria · Oct 26, 2015

The_Traveler said:
Not your best work. - and too small to really see any detail.
the colors are saturated and lush but, at least in this size, her hair is an ink blot.
Her pose seems awkward and forced andthe is no grace or delicacy in the way she is standing.
It's sort of a 'stand up against the wall and put your hands up'.
Every limb and her face is a different tone.

Sorry,

oh... you just don't like me!

but seriously... I see your points... for the limbs, I couldn't fix that, and I promised to myself that I would never photograph her again in short sleeves and skirt

thank you!