wrapped... a bit

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  1. mmaria

    mmaria Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    FITBMX Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    I like it, but I wish she "popped" in color/light from everything around her a little more. :)
     
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    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Agree with the schnozz! I'd also like to see her moved away from the centre just a bit. That said, it's a nice image, and I really like the concept.
     
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    Not your best work. - and too small to really see any detail.
    the colors are saturated and lush but, at least in this size, her hair is an ink blot.
    Her pose seems awkward and forced andthe is no grace or delicacy in the way she is standing.
    It's sort of a 'stand up against the wall and put your hands up'.
    Every limb and her face is a different tone.

    Sorry,
     
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    FITBMX Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    I noticed you didn't come up with that name until after I posted self-portraits!:biglaugh::biglaugh::biglaugh:
     
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    mmaria Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    yeah I understand

    Thank you :)
     
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    oh... you just don't like me!

    but seriously... I see your points... for the limbs, I couldn't fix that, and I promised to myself that I would never photograph her again in short sleeves and skirt

    thank you!
     

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