First of all, thanks for all the tips that you guys have given me over these past few days that I've been a member of this forum. I learned A LOT. But of course, I have so much more to learn still. That is why, I hope you can critique my latest photoshoot (just did the shoot this afternoon). Here are the photos: P.S. XYO is a non-existent clothing brand. I've thought of the name while working on a previous project and I liked it so much that I decided to use it whenever I shoot and design a magazine-like spread.