Yeah... I'm new to here and photography

This picture was taken with my enV3 camera sorry for quality, what do you guys have to say about this picture?

I'm getting a digital camera soon, sorry again for the poor quality (this is my 2nd planned picture)
C&C pleaseeSend To Phone

 

I think it has the potential to be a cool shot but neither the piece nor its shadow is in focus. Good try especially taking it with a phone camera.

 

Its a little on the dark side, I like the idea but its also out of focus.

 

Thanks guys=]
What about this one? (this is still on my camera phone and it's my 1st planned picture)