Yoana Dark Soul | C&C

[DanielOhana]

Well, another picture from the photoshoot of my friend Yoana.
I'm very new to photography so any feedback can help.
Thank you all last time you helped me so much with your C&C!

so,
here it is :

 

[Arthur53]

Wish my portraits work so well. Only comment would like to see all the hair, top of head. Arms so far back looks a little awkward to me. Just my opinion. I am no expert.

 

[DanielOhana]

Wish my portraits work so well. Only comment would like to see all the hair, top of head. Arms so far back looks a little awkward to me. Just my opinion. I am no expert.

Thank you so much!

 

[The_Traveler]

It seems almost sacrilegious to make a comment about such a gorgeous face nicely caught
Lovely pose, with that dark hair framing the face.
The only possible thought is that cropping it a bit closer, making her larger in the frame, might add to the impact.
Arthur made a point about her hair that bears commenting; I think that when there is lots of space on three sides and one side is clipped like that, it is a bit discomforting, albeit unconsciously, to the viewer.
If you crop this a bit closer, she gets more powerful in the frame and that bit of a clip at the top becomes meaningless.
(No matter whether you agree or not, this is a wonderful image.)

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[DanielOhana]

okmm thank you. noted!