Your Smile Makes Me Melt

[PrecociousEmber]

alllrighty...

What does everyone think of this? Her neck is washed out, i think. Other than that, I'm really proud of this. This is one of the first portraits I've ever taken seriously. So lemme know..

 

[mentos_007]

very nice... I'd play with a DOF a bit to have the background completely blurred but it is nice

 

[Corry]

The lights and shadows are too harsh, in my opinion, and the glasses have got to go. The focus also seems to be a bit off...it's softer on the face, and sharper on her leg. Other than that, not a bad first try.

 

[PrecociousEmber]

well.. this wasn't a "photoshoot" because we were just out taking pictures... but then i tried to take some better ones of her... so it was spur of the moment, so she had on what she had on. i agree about the dof. and i see what you're saying about the focus.

thanks, guys

 

[JonMikal]

she does have a great smile and i agree with everyones comments. i also believe it to be a bit overexposed.