I say well done and welcome to the forum. Other may not like the cropping into the top of the head, but it doesn't bother me one bit. Beautiful model and a nicely crafted portrait.
But there is a nit ... if this was my image, I'd remove the small creases in her upper lip and smooth out the creases the lower.
She looks appealing in this image. I like her body/neck/head positioning in this, and the styling of the hair. This shot has a nice, light, ethereal quality to it.
Beautifully lit and edited. My only critique is that she appears to have lost skin detail on her forehead, I assume from the very shallow depth of field. I only comment on this because to me it gives the appearance of over-retouching the skin in that spot.