Another Portrait in the works.......

[oldnavy170]

I am working on my portraits since they are my real passion right now. I think this one came out good. I am only unsure if I went with the correct crop. Do you think I should of cropped more?

 

[AprilRamone]

I wonder what it would look like if you cropped out where the wall stops? Or added more of the right side back in?

 

[eravedesigns]

I dont know how you could improve it but it dosent make me feel the photo. I was thinking that maybe if the light was on the other side of her face but I am not sure