Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by DocFrankenstein, Mar 13, 2005.
Doesn't do it for me for some reason. Don't know why.
I like the angle, but it could be sharper. I think it may work better in black and white, but I like the approach you've taken with it
I agree, it isn't really working. If you're trying for an abstract geometrical, then I think there are a couple elements, such as the plants at the bottom, that are too 'real' and break it away from the abstract. If you're not going for an abstract, then there's not really a decent subject for the photo. I would try cropping the bottom out and really just getting into the shapes and the negative space.
Thanks for the replies.
It's not really sharp cause I want handholding at 1/3rd of second.
It was supposed to be a geometrical abstract. I'll try a couple more variations and post them soon.
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