One of my B&W

[hart0710]

I enjoy photography, but never know what my pictures are missing. C&C please. Thanks

 

[LaFoto]

Nice, moody picture ... wonderful eyes.
If he had just one more catchlight somehow in his left eye... I can see this was all natural light and you have something like a bright table reflect in his near eye (mostly) .. but some more?

Well, actually that would be something for our portrait specialists to comment about really ... should I move this from the General Gallery to the Portrait Gallery for you?

 

[hart0710]

That would be great. Thank you.

 

[JohnEBongo]

Nice shot. It looks a little reddish to me......

 

[AprilRamone]

Yep, I think his face is too dark. A fill of some sort would probably have helped this image.

 

[hart0710]

Thank you for the feedback. I'm always looking for ways to improve.

 

[oldnavy170]

I like this photo. The color is what caught my eye. Great job!