2 at the beach for C&C

[Raian-san]

I went on a mini vacay with my friend to Carmel and took some photos. The past 2 shoot, some of my photos look a bit soft so this time I wanted to make it look sharper. How are these? Just wanted to know if I'm improving since the past 2 photoshoot I had. Advice and tips is definitely appreciated.

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[Netskimmer]

Wow, she really looks like Uma Thurman

 

[Raian-san]

Wow, she really looks like Uma Thurman

Really? I'll definitely let her know about the kind compliment!

 

[willis_927]

Nice looking model, but the poses are very awkward IMO. They second one kind of looks like she layed her back on something pointy.

 

[gsgary]

Fantastic looking model. not so good looking poses, but the lighting on the hair in the first shot is very nice

 

[Vtec44]

Great pictures. However, coming from landscaping photography background, your horizontal line in the 2nd pic is off.

Great pix though. I'm not good with poses either so I cannot really comment. lol

 

[Raian-san]

I was trying to get some of the looks in my head that reminded of those swimsuit pose but I think I failed. I guess I'm kind of happy with the lighting for future reference shooting at the beach and having my photos sharper than my 1st attempt last week. Still need to work on posing, thanks for the advices so far guys.

@Vtec44 I notice it now too lol, gonna fix that.