2 photos from a shoot for class. C&C

[bradh]

Took these too shots today for a project for one of my classes. Opinions?

 

[oldmacman]

The exposure, colour and light are good. I don't understand the composition choices in the first pic and the way the clock is held looks very unnatural in the second.

 

[BlackSheep]

Both are fantastic shots IMO. What were the project requirements specifically?
Nice job.

ETA - minor point upon looking at the photos again - the lighting could be a tad stronger on both....i.e. in photo 1- it would be nice to have a bit more light at the front of your model and/or on the clock she's holding.

 

[bradh]

It was a group project with 2 people combining their styles. I love urban decay, texture and color my partner is really big on portraiture and people which I am not. The concept is kind of forgotten time hint the broken clock and old textured wall. The rest of the non model shots are in the general gallery.

 

[Sbuxo]

A+ work. <3

 

[BlackSheep]

Neat project! In that light, I think the first shot is actually the best for your assignment, but I think that it's not quite in balance in terms of the requirements - the emphasis is much more on urban decay than portraiture - I see the peeling paint long before I even look at model. Perhaps if the model had turned her head just a bit to look at the camera? Still a really strong shot though. Good job.

 

[dallasimagery]

I like #1; pretty cool - kinda eerie!

 

[bradh]

Thanks everyone

 

[CarlyDyan]

I really like the texture of the wall in the first photo.