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dsquared

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Need some comments. My last shots that I posted wasn't so good as I thought, that really helped me, all your critics... So, get on it !
 
these are not displeasing but lack real interest for me. I'd like to see some life in the street or perhaps a citizen leaning against the wall. #2 is pretty but that's about it. Well that's only my opinion :)
 
#1 looks a little overexposed. Some detail is lost in the left side of the image. #2 is a little underexposed. This may be able to be corrected in PP to bring out some of the detail in foreground. That would add some interest.
 
these are not displeasing but lack real interest for me. I'd like to see some life in the street or perhaps a citizen leaning against the wall. #2 is pretty but that's about it. Well that's only my opinion :)

I disagree.
The first one is well done as a street scape. Vanishing point lands on a third. A tilt shift would have made this better, along with a sky that's more threatening.
Would have been a damn good monochrome.
 
I agree with Trever, technically they're ok although #1 seems to be leaning slightly to the left. But they lack interest for me.
 
The first is not bad. I think the shadow bisecting the street saves this from being an ordinary "touristy" shot. I don't think it's overexposed, but it's right on the edge, which for me is OK, but this is very subjective.
 
thanks for comments!!! that really helped me
 

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