2nd Attempt at portraits

[Stez]

I have had another go at portraits with a similar setup as befor but using my daughter as the model. Any constructive C&C gladly welcome.

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[tirediron]

Very nice, very well done. My only comment would be that the lighting in #3 seems very harsh. I would suggest a stronger diffuser. As well the WB on that one is different than the rest; distinctly colder.

 

[rufus5150]

Makeup or Post-process on the skin? For my tastes, it seems a bit unnatural.