3 recent pics for C&C

[score04w]

Couple of pics that I've taken that I would like some feedback for.

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2.

3.

 

[er111a]

here made a edit hope you dont mind

 

[MrBarney]

^^ Sorry, I prefer the original.

Feedback as requested:

1) Nice scene. A lot of the sky is blown out (and er111a's edit made that worse which is why I prefer this one). I'm thinking a polarizing filter may help?
2) The red draws my attention to the chair, which isn't particularly interesting in itself. Table cloth looks over exposed. Perhaps a little more space and an off-centre position for the table would have been more pleasing?
3) The light from the windows is causing you problems, and more light is needed on the subject (the flowers). A piece of white card would have helped.

I think #1 is the best of the set.

 

[NiceShot]

I like 1 the most but I wish the sky wasn't as blown out. Hey er11a what effect is that on your edit?

 

[score04w]

Thank you for the edit and feedback. I was having problems with the first one. It was a very hot day and the sky was already hazy and almost blown out. I can't remember if i used a cp or not. It also drives me a little crazy because i hadn't noticed the tag of her shirt til i got home.

 

[misstwinklytoes]

Shirt tag is fairly easy fix.

 

[SrBiscuit]

watch the horizons.

#1 is a very nice shot.

 

[er111a]

sexy soft and Diabolical

 

[SrBiscuit]

lol diabolical

you got a dictionary over there er11a?
im not getting diabolical from these.
please expand upon your thoughts. im curious.

 

[er111a]

thats what the action is called

 

[er111a]

this is where I got it from ------->
Photoshop Action: Diabolic by ~davidnanchin on deviantART

 

[score04w]

did a mild hdr style edit on the flowers.

 

[er111a]

mmmm not sure bout that edit

 

[score04w]

just trying out some different editing tech. Thanks for the feedback though.

 

[er111a]

your welcome keep trying it will improve