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[duncanp]

A few pics i took in my room when i couldnt go out.... this is my first attempt at stuff like this so all critique or advice is welcome

Sorry about the size of the first few

Thanks for looking

 

[duncanp]

:er:

 

[charizzi]

I like #3 the best The white background looks good and the lighting looks good to me too Too bad the deoderant stick was a little dirty

 

[duncanp]

thanks

 

[PlasticSpanner]

If you're doing close ups then attention to detail is paramount.

Play around with the lighting a bit from different directions and levels using desk lamps if need be. Also try getting your subjects from angles possibly nobody has seen before!:thumbup:

#4 looks good. Just needed a little more light on the shoe or maybe a half to one stop less exposure to lose the sheet over the toe end.:thumbup:

 

[duncanp]

thanks i was kind of inpsired by your xylophone shot , but i have no where near the same amount of skill as you...

 

[PlasticSpanner]

Don't be fooled!

I have little skill yet! That Xylophone shot was from about 8-9 shots from a whole 36 exposure film that turned out how I wanted them to! The result of 6 hours of experimenting

All the rest are rubbish, but with my notes I should have a higher success rate next time!

 

[duncanp]

i took around 30 lol most of them are on my online photo album