4:57, just wanting some comments?

[Smitzel269]

Or most of you will read it 11:21

This is the first artsy photo I have ever really tried to do. I like how it turned out since it was just one of those spur of the moments photos. Saw this clock in my living room, put it on the stairs, and shot it. Just looking for some comments on it. I guess critique, too.

 

[TwoTwoLeft]

Looks like 11:21 me!

 

[johnh2005]

Yeah a spur of the moment shot at 11:21

 

[KmH]

4:57, just wanting some comments?

When I race I look well out ahead where I want the race car to go, not where the race car is right now.

The secret to winning a car race is to use more throttle, and less brake, than any of the other drivers in the race.

For a right handed golfer the right leg is the foundation of the golf swing. If the foundation sways during the backswing, the swing will be less than effective. Footwork is very important to the golf swing.

The bright spot at the bottom of the shot draws the eye and right out of the photo, which is not good, because the eye then has to come back to take a good look at the clock (11:22).

Why did you make the image file a .GIF, instead of a JPEG?

We can add some balance so that bright spot at the bottom has less visual weight:

 

[Smitzel269]

4:57, just wanting some comments?

When I race I look well out ahead where I want the race car to go, not where the race car is right now.

The secret to winning a car race is to use more throttle, and less brake, than any of the other drivers in the race.

For a right handed golfer the right leg is the foundation of the golf swing. If the foundation sways during the backswing, the swing will be less than effective. Footwork is very important to the golf swing.

The bright spot at the bottom of the shot draws the eye and right out of the photo, which is not good, because the eye then has to come back to take a good look at the clock (11:22).

Why did you make the image file a .GIF, instead of a JPEG?

We can add some balance so that bright spot at the bottom has less visual weight:

I have never been good at telling time I always get the two hands mixed up, I'm ashamed! I accidently saved it as GIF I guess in Photoshop after resizing it. I will post a JPEG version in a bit. Do you think I could burn out the bright spot at the bottom and make the image, as a whole, a little brighter?

 

[Smitzel269]

Yeah a spur of the moment shot at 11:21

I have no idea why I put "Spare" haha. Thanks for the correction, I think I was changing how I wanted to say it mid-sentence.

 

[SkyBlue]

On this one, brighter is better. Try it again... 10:10 or 10:09 would look nice!

 

[TwoTwoLeft]

I think you just wanted it to be BEER:30 really bad....

 

[Smitzel269]

BEFORE (original)

AFTER

 

[Smitzel269]

On this one, brighter is better. Try it again... 10:10 or 10:09 would look nice!

I wish I could play around with the clock, but it's not mine

 

[e.rose]

It's super underexposed. Even after you tried to brighten it.

 

[HomelessBoy]

it's bed time

 

[Smitzel269]

Lol...not for me!

 

[Smitzel269]

bumpp.