A beautiful 16 year old girl... C&C please...

[amolitor]

Amusingly, I *think* that Tee was complaining, as I was, that the catchlights are too dead center in the eye.

This was interpreted, I think, as a complaint that the subject was too dead center in the frame. So, I'm pretty sure we have people arguing past one another, here.

 

[pixmedic2 1]

The girl is pretty much the whole frame, so there really isnt an issue of her being centered or not. Unless someone was referring to the angle she was at.

 

[unpopular]

Amusingly, I *think* that Tee was complaining, as I was, that the catchlights are too dead center in the eye.

This was interpreted, I think, as a complaint that the subject was too dead center in the frame. So, I'm pretty sure we have people arguing past one another, here.

OHHHHHHH!

 

[jwbryson1]

You might consider a bit more contrast or color saturation.

 

[Tuffythepug]

haha i gave her multicolored teeth

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I have to say ginoo, you are a real piece of work. You do not allow anyone to edit your photos but you feel it's perfectly fine to defile someone else's ?

What are you, 12 ?

 

[gsgary]

Nice looking girl. Well done, generally.

Looks like you filled with on camera flash, which looks fine in this case except that the catchlight in her eyes is dead center, producing a slightly creepy look. Also, her teeth appear a hair yellow.

I have never seen perfect white teeth unless you are vain and pay thousands to have them whitened

 

[michael9000000]

haha i gave her multicolored teeth

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Yup... You colored her teeth... Haha... I've seen your posts... That's apparently the full extent of your talent... Perhaps you'd like to make it okay to edit your photos?

 

[ginoo]

haha i was just joking, didn't mean to cause any harm! if you saw the photo before it was deleted, i adjusted stuff quite a bit. the teeth were just a joke lol

 

[ginoo]

... Perhaps you'd like to make it okay to edit your photos?

You do not allow anyone to edit your photos but you feel it's perfectly fine to defile someone else's ?

What are you, 12 ?

feel free to edit my photos!! lol i actually just did a photoshoot with some younger girls

 

[tirediron]

haha i was just joking, didn't mean to cause any harm! if you saw in the photo before it was deleted, i adjusted the photo quite a bit. the teeth were just a joke lol

"haha", "lol" Now that's what I call a heart-felt and sincere apology!

 

[tirediron]

feel free to edit my photos!!

If you wish to allow people to edit your photos, please change the 'Edit' permission in your profile.

 

[ginoo]

you got it babe !

 

[michael9000000]

... Perhaps you'd like to make it okay to edit your photos?

You do not allow anyone to edit your photos but you feel it's perfectly fine to defile someone else's ?

What are you, 12 ?

feel free to edit my photos!! lol i actually just did a photoshoot with some younger girls

There's not much I could do with these photos unless I had the RAW files...

The girl's expression on photo 1 is nice, but you've cut out way too much of her, and far too much negative space that adds nothing at all to the photo.

Photo #2 seems dull... The focus and exposure is good, but the expression does nothing... The phantom hand is awkward and the hairband on the wrist is a distraction... The photo lacks contrast and sharpness overall (especially when you look at hair)...

Photo #3 has the most potential, but still some big problems... The model's face and hair are really nice, but her chest is so blown out that it clashes with the rest of the photo... I wouldn't even call this a black and white conversion... It's more like blown out and gray.

 

[unpopular]

Oh please. Perhaps Ginoo is tactless and disrespectfull, but these images are better than average and on an order of magnitude better than anything I've seen from you. I think you critique is given more from you anal region than anything genuine or objective!

 

[Robin_Usagani]

A little warmer would be good.