Atta boy, Mike!!
I think you know I'm not a fan of shooting "out of key" (light clothing on dark background).
The shots of the girls are wonderful!! I absolutely love the last one. I suspect you'll do a bit with the presentation... cropping, shape, matting, etc.
Very nice!!
-Pete
Thanks Pete.
If I were to set up a background for their clothing, I would have chosen something light. Heck, If I had more room, I might have cranked up my background light to really brighten the wall. All in all, I think the warm tone of the wall helped as it does sort of compliment pink and maybe even her white sweater.
Any suggestions for presentation etc? I tried to leave room for tighter ratios (8x10 etc) so these 2:3 might look a little loose.
I showed them the photos on the camera, right after the shoot. (I realized this might not have been a good idea, but the promise of that was needed to calm the girls down near the end). Anyway, one of the shots didn't sync with the shutter very well...and it looked like a very heavy vignette...and they loved it. So I added quite a bit of vignette to all the shots.
Nicely Done!
I love the poses in #2 and #4, and the colors in all of them are nice and warm. I'm not so sure I like the white molding that goes behind the woman in #2, it seems a little distracting to me. Out of curiousity, why did you have it set up that way?
All in all, very nice portraits!!! What gear do you use?
The white molding is the baseboard on their wall. Not much I could do about it. I guess I could have cloned it out but that might look weird. For the post part, I tried to be low and shoot against the wall, rather than the floor and wall...but she wanted a shot of her standing in her jeans...and I wasn't going to shoot up at her...so I had to stand up and shoot.
My gear: Canon 20D cameras, I think these were all shot with my Tamron 17-50mm F2.8 lens. I had four Alienbee lights. Softbox main to camera right. Umbrella fill to camera left. Background light with scoop and a hair light on a boom with honeycomb grid.