A few portraits, c&c please :)

haleina

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I'm an amateur, just starting out. But I'm open to all comments and criticism.

All photo done with natural lighting.

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2.
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3.
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4.
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first is exhilirating...second is a moody ..third is finger portrait and fourth is a thoughtful mood....fine, all with different characteristics.
 
for beginner, not bad :)
#1 is more appealing, all the others are a flat snapshots, no punctuation of the character.
keep shooting and improving.
 
I really like the expressions you captured on these shots, and the colors are nice. The crooked street in the third one is a little distracting and all of them are tad bit too dark for me.
 
I like the 4th one best, just her expression, like she's having a good little snicker to herself, but I agree with MrRamonG, they all seem a bit dark for my liking.
 
The first is a nice picture but a bit underexposed.
The fourth is a lot underexposed.

(you might get more complete responses if you allowed your pictures to be edited)

Lew
 

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