A flower for C&C

[Eirik]

Here's a shot of a flower. Wasn't easy to get a picture of it, because there were bees everywhere

Shutter speed: 1/250
f/1.8
ISO: 3200
Used my brother's 50mm lens
No flash used


Blom by EirikBrak, on Flickr


Thank you

 

[tirediron]

C&C per req:

A nice, albeit not really exciting capture. I would suggest trying to brighten up the blooms a little bit and I would definitely crop the top of the image just above the upper-most group of blooms. Notice the way the stem forms a line which draws the eye away from the lower blooms and out of the image? Leading lines are useful tools, but you want them to lead the eye into the image, not out of it.

Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

~John

 

[Eirik]

Yeah. Should have cropped off the top of the flower. It is out of focus. Exept from that, I think it is a nice picture.

Still learning

 

[noodles]

Yup as others have said. But i don't limbs chopped off as with flowers as a whole, so perhaps stop up a bit to get the top of the flower in focus. To me it seems slightly under exposed, some lighting would have helped.